Sparkle in your eyes lost me in wonder
A flirty smile…. fruit of vine temptation
Triggers and shivers in my spine
Kaleidoscope my senses
Awaken ambrosia …a passion
Ignites a flame of heated desire
A touch of seductive whisper
Titillate the mind tapping in my soul
Your name in winds whispered breath
Fly me on wings of passion
In universe stars infinite dreamscape
Expands my vision in heavenly fantasy
Arosing me with thoughts of you
Reminiscing moments of first spark lightening
Powerful electrifying current runs through my body
In simultaneous volcanic explosion
In love forever boundries of magnetic chemistry
Always touching multifariously
Constantly yearning hunger to devour
Sending ecstatic shivers in my existance
A contest entry
- Total Seduction: Mind and Body (18 and over ONLY) by Celticmoon.
600 points, ended October 15, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yes, this was written so well. The standard of this contest is very high. I like the heavenly ecstacy painted all over. Well done on a really great piece. Good luck in the contest.
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This is very tasteful. Very erotic in a nice way. I love it. Thank you for sharing your work here with us on AllPoetry. Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~
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Smoking!!
Oh My Word!
What a piece You have penned and I had to get the extinguisher out
Love the images and yesss my squeegee works
Powerful verse and satiates the senses!
Thank You for sharing Your Erotic Talent
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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My dear
this is soft and sensual love here that you have penned very well for this contest. I am sure you will do great, thanks for sharing, I loved this.
Seductive Whisper
Ephiphany
Great title....
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very nice
The descriptions here are wonderful. You used many things to compare to here and the flow is really good. Greatjob, The Shaker
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Electricity in sex
Powerful electrifying current runs through our body
In simultaneous volcanic explosion "The climax in sex is beautifull worded. The poem is fluent and well done, dear Rose.The photo is a fine match to the poem!
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Ahh! I think it's time for a cold shower, this is really good and I wish you the best in the contest. Thanks for sharing this sensual treat with me...
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Oh man
~fanning cheeks~ this was smoking hot.
Loved this. Great job with the classy sizzler
Great job and good luck in the contest.
delila
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