you can fall into a dream
a long lost lover found
it doesnt take as much as it seems
you can fall apart at the seam
fall into a hollow sound
you can fall into a dream
fly into a sunny beam
break down and swirl around
it doesnt take as much as it seems
dive into a pool of cream
and drink it in until you've drowned
you can fall into a dream
the world exists as you deam
but youre always homeward bound
it doesnt take as much as it seems
your spirit flies and gleams
twirl round and round
you can fall into a dream
it doesnt take as much as it seems
Author notes
Villanelle on Dreams. I did not capitalize and did not use punctuation because I wanted to set it free in the abstract form it requires...enjoy.
A contest entry
- "What You Love" by FallenAngel09.
300 points, ended October 4, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow! that was pretty wild.
I really liked this one.
Very universal.
Very unique.
....It doesnt take as much as it seems...
Maybe its not so complicated to feel the rapture.
Great job.
BLESSINGS GYPSY,
LOWELL POE. -
Thank you for your entry into my contest, your talent and hardwork are very much appreciated. I liked this poem, I always like repeating lines as long as they aren't too frequent and are integrated into the poem adequately, which these lines are. Great job and good luck
Your Host,
Tiphanie
p.s sorry for not getting back to you sooner but it has been hectic and all i've had time to do is go to class and study. Anyway, hope you are well.
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