"one sheep, two sheep."
Bam.
I'm floating in what feels like
cotton balls solidified.
Theres this
seemingly solid sensation
in my back.
I open my eyes to see
air around me but,
I'm not falling.
Just one thought and I'm
watching him float beside me.
This is my comfort and my grip.
I'm in my
alternate reality.
My calm,
my peace,
my dreams.
Author notes
I chose free verse, because, like dreams, it has no rules. (and thats my strong point)
A contest entry
- "What You Love" by FallenAngel09.
300 points, ended October 4, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your entry into my contest, your talent and hard work are very much appreciated. I loved the short succinct words that were put together just right to creat pictures of tranquility, whatever they look like. Great job and good luck.
Your Host,
Tiphanie
p.s sorry for not getting back to you sooner but it has been hectic and all I have had time to do is study and go to class. Any way, hope you are well.
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