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Rain

The skies will rain today.
I can sense the sadness
lingering in the air.
The clouds will cry today
and release in screams
their feelings of despair

(Oh raging storm won't you come
and save me from what I've become)

and the teardrops will awaken my pores
and the pain will clense my soul.
In the end I'll be reborn
as the earth becomes a whole.

The heavens will shout today
The thunder shall roar
and call out my name.
Their passion will strike today
lightning illuminates
their pure disdain.

(Oh raging storm won't you come
and save me from what I've become)

and the teardrops will awaken my pores
and the pain will clense my soul
In the end I'll be reborn
as the earth becomes a whole

The skies will rain today..
and the clouds will cry today..

Oh raging storm won't you come
and save me from what I've become

and the teardrops will awaken my pores
and the pain will clense my soul
and I'll cry with the skies
and pray I become whole.

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I wanted it to rain today..
it felt like a rainy day

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  • ForeverJenn
    September 16, 2007

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    Victoria!!!!
    You have no idea how happy I am.
    You posted!!!
    I know you have more.. keep going!

    It did look like rain today. Too bad it didn't.
    Don't we all just wish that the rain would wash everything away and let us start over new.
    but i guess that would be too easy.

    Amazing poem.. as always!
    I heart you.
    Again.. glad you came over today.. I shall miss you.