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Balance

[Verse:]

With life to balance death and death to balance life,

No exception remains just as pleasure to strife.

And as the rule's continuely ignored,

As unknowing humans 'come more bored,

The law of Balance is thus forgot

Causing the endless war to be forever faught.

 

[Chorus 1:]

And through the endless bloodlust and the shame

Forgotten momeories shall always be the one to blame.

Forever shall humanity suffer their fate

In the deep, dark pits of the Abyss when it's too late.

 

[Verse:]

Destruction of lives past been,

Permitting life to be unseen.

Just as the lives of death are brought,

So must the death of lives be sought.

 

[Chorus 2:]

And through the endless bloodlust and the shame,

Forgotten memories shall always be the one to blame.

Forever in the night, though light shall still remain

To keep eternal Balance and lives from being flamed.

 

[Bridge:]

And so the lives be lost from inbalance in our world,

Destroying all existance as our events unfirl.

After all is gone, no chances shall be remain

To permit us another chance from avoiding our set fate.

 

[Chorus reprise:]

And through the endless bloodlust and the shame

Forgotten momeories shall always be the one to blame.

Forever shall humanity suffer their fate

In the deep, dark pits of the Abyss when it's too late.

 

And through the endless bloodlust and the shame,

Forgotten memories shall always be the one to blame.

Forever in the night, though light shall still remain

To keep eternal Balance and lives from being flamed.

 

And through the endless bloodlust and the shame,

Forgotten memories shall always be the one to blame.

Forever in the night, though light shall still remain

To keep eternal Balance and lives from being flamed.

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  • Creatress silver member
    September 21, 2007
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    Well done, thanks for entering the contest.

  • Figaro
    September 20, 2007
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    Very powerful. I wish I could hear the music for it. Very well written.


  • Taco Bellian Paige
    September 14, 2007

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    I love this.

    Hey tim, whats up? I love this poem. It makes alot of sense when it comes to many aspects of life. Good write, keep pennin'

    -Paige