Patterns in randomness
signals in static
shapes and lines
confluence of consciousness
structures imposed by experience
your face is not yours at all
but how my eyes see it
my perceptions are mine alone
that's the magic
believing is seeing...
and I choose to believe
Author notes
Prompt: You take the world out of my eyes
10 lines
A contest entry
- Quickie... again by Exodus.
300 points, ended September 14, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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BEAUTIFUL
Very nicely done. I love the wonder of love, the ability to see everything with those wonderful rose-colored glasses. Loved the images and the nice rhythm and flow you have going on with this piece. Good luck in your contest.
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11 lines
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haha, I wrote ten... and then the eleventh came, and was perfect. So I added it.
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Beautiful thoughts you have here. Love the simple elegance in the last phrase -- "and I choose to believe."
Best of luck in the contest.
DancingRed.
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