You take the world right out of my eyes
You break it apart with all of your lies
You drain my life by drawing tears
You break my soul playing on my fears
You seem to be set on destroying me
But there is something you'll never see
I'm stronger than you'll ever know
I'll still be here when you finally go
You take the world right out of my eyes
But you don't realise I wont beleive your lies
A contest entry
- Quickie... again by Exodus.
300 points, ended September 14, 2007, 8 entries
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Comments
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A very powerful piece full of strong enough and conviction. Certainly an interesting take on the prompt. Thank you
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well done here. enjoyed the read
great rhythm and flow.
best of luck in this contest
Tory
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Prompt:: You take the world out of my eyes
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