You sicken me.
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At the thought of your vile name
My stomach spasms as I double over in pain,
My throat runs hot as each swallow is a thousand years work,
And sweat icily climbs down my back agonizingly slow.
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I had opened myself up,
Cried over your shoulder when life got me down,
Made myself vulnerable to you,
And trusted you with all my secrets.
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I thought you could do the same
And I wish you could.
But now I find that half of your
So called secrets, were only lies.
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What made you feel I couldn’t hand the truth?
Was it because I had not gone through the exact same thing
Or because I had a different life?
Well guess what babe, I can handle it.
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What little trust we may have built,
You have just destroyed,
Up in flames it went,
The match in your outstretched hand.
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Wipe that smirk off of your face,
Or I shall wipe it off for you.
How else do you suppose I handle this?
I had no reason to disbelieve you.
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I thought I could trust you
But once again, I was wrong.
Please tell me what you think
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wow intense i love it!!!!!!
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wow i love this ending.
But once again, I was wrong.
it's blunt and really finishes this off with a hard hit. well done i really like this. you make your readers see what you write and thats hard to do
xx i hope you are ok
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thank you very much
i really like this piece
and yes, i am over it by now, thanks for the concern
=]
btw, i really like your icon
i have that on my backgroundd lol
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woah. glad i don't know someone like that.
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wow that was friggin powerful
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Strong
I like the anger and I find the first stanza is the strongest part of the poem. Doesn't everyone know someone like this?
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