A mercenary of innocence
you toil and rejoice
protected by fraud
insolated with false promise
camouflaged credibility
Hide beyond the divide
a precipitous derelict
taking organs as nourishment
creating addictions
devouring brilliant light.
Author notes
You take the world out of my eyes
A contest entry
- Quickie... again by Exodus.
300 points, ended September 14, 2007, 8 entries
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Wonderful use of language and a great take on the prompt!!! Thank you very much
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Thank You!!!!
thanks for the recognition and mental exercise
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Prompt:: You take the world out of my eyes
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ok
here you go, thanks for hosting
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