I want a brand new car,
With a tank full of gas.
I want my drivers license back,
And a pocket full of cash.
I want to ride on twenty fours,
Up and down the road.
I want to live the life of luxury,
With an open mind,
And my feet on the floor.
I want to live this life,
On fashionable dreams.
I want to jump up and down,
To find out whats in between.
It's just my imagination,
running away with me.
Oh yeah,
It's just my imagination running away with me.
A contest entry
- rhyme by Tangled Angle.
300 points, ended September 15, 2007, 7 entries
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600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 6 entries
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Comments
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this is the best one yet,
thank you for your entry.

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hehe, very cute. i like the last two lines a lot.
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Lol I can relate to this too.. But I want my car to be a Blue Mustang Convertible. If not, then a blue or yellow corvette.
Thanks for entering and good luck.



