{chorus}
Yell it, Scream it, Get it out,
All your pent up anger and frustration
Out loud for the whole world to hear
How you were double crossed in humiliation
Whatever it is let it free
Let it console your heart to empty
Keeping it inside year after year
Even day after day
In the end has a high cost
And it could be life that you pay
So… {chorus}
Yell it, Scream it, Get it out,
All your pent up anger and frustration
Out loud for the whole world to hear
How you were double crossed in humiliation
You say it doesn’t matter
You say it doesn’t hurt
But I see the look in your eyes
and know it has to touch your heart
and though you say it doesn’t matter
because you are here now and today
in the long run it does
because in the end you are still not okay
So… {chorus}
Yell it, Scream it, Get it out,
All your pent up anger and frustration
Out loud for the whole world to hear
How you were double crossed in humiliation
What ever your story it cannot be as bad as mine
However much your pain you are not alone
Though you want to hide in a corner
And cry until you cannot any longer
I’m telling you
All it’s going to do
Is bury you deeper
Please tell me what you think
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Very punky
I liked this, pertains to pop punk music (Y)
The syllable work was a bit poor though, I found that some of the lines were either too short or too long, however, as your first written song I'd say you've done very well.
It's catchy but not eloquent, it's vague but it's not empty. Well done with this one katie. -
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thank you very much. yeahh i didn't really count syllables and i didn't really add in the breaks, but whatever i dont want it to be a real song anyway..
thanks though =]
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wow that would make a really cool song i must say
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Angry
Actually, I felt this was cathartic, telling everyone to relieve their tensions and angry, it really flowed well, you could put a tune to it.
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this is really good
I like the lyrics alot...i hear like a faster pace hard rock song going behind it...i really like it..keep on writing and hopefully hear it live or something one day on the radio... good luck
Tony
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hmmm... I do like it. but the rhyme scheme of the chorus just didn't work for me. Maybe if I heard someone actually reading/singing it then it would sound better. but I always lost the rhyme between frustration and humiliation as if it weren't there.
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hmmm... I do like it. but the rhyme scheme of the chorus just didn't work for me. Maybe if I heard someone actually reading/singing it then it would sound better. but I always lost the rhyme between frustration and humiliation as if it weren't there.
:] katie
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thanks katie.
honestly i wasn't going for rhyme
and remind me to read this to you in CW
to see if it sounds better out loud.
~WU
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