take your hands on a slow and gentle journey
lightly stroking the shoulders you exposed
following your eyes with your hands...
I know you are staring at my nipples
already hard...
they were hard before you undressed me
now they're bursting with sensations
sending shock waves
to the centre of me
you haven't even touched them
but they ache
for your fingertips to tease
your lips to brush against them
waiting for you to take them
one at a time
into the warmth
of your mouth...
a hand on my shoulder
eyes roaming over my body
already you have me wet...
hot and steaming
trickling down my thighs
making you grow before my eyes...
it's so beautiful
a work of art...
licking your lips
thirsty my love?
hungry for me?
I can't take my eyes
off the miracle
growing before me
see it trembling
ready to burst
glistening drops of your desire
luring me
to kneel before you
slowly lean forward
to taste
with the tip of my tongue
a light flick...just enough
to get that first precious drop
and let your sweetness
invade my mouth
A contest entry
- PW allowed (Friends list) by Riftkin.
475 points, ended February 8, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Wanna Touch You All Over and Over and Over by Blooming Poet.
310 points, ended February 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is hot and you did a graet job with it
these lines here I am sure all the guys wish
a lady would be happy to do
I can't take my eyes
off the miracle
growing before me
see it trembling
ready to burst
glistening drops of your desire
luring me
to kneel before you
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Very lovely and pretty. This really was a journey through the eyes of erotic green. Well done my dear. Just lovely.
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Thank you for the lovely words. I've just finished reading your parts 1 to 7 and trying to come up with a comment. It might help to wait until breathing returns to normal
Margaret
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A beautifully written sensual poem that really tkes the reader for a ride. It really is an Erotic Journey....
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Awesome, sexy, sensual, erotic and so much more Beautifully penned indeed. Well written piece for sure 
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You are drawing a very intimate picture of your encounter with a lover...I enjoyed reading very much.
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