I wish you were here
just hugging me
pressing your lips against my cheek
loving me
dressing me with your love from my head to my feet.
lovely
that's what it is.
Love me.
like nothing before
so new
a feeling like a young artist’s
with their first paper crayons and glue.
So thrilling is the feeling.
Concealing the thought
Of pain and anger.
And finding what was once sought.
That’s what you do to me.
Make me feel better.
With no endeavor whatsoever.
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I really liked it.. Brilliant write.. I can really relate, and I am sure many other people (if not most) can too.. Thanks for entering! Good Luck!!!
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Very nicely written the excitement and need of love we all crave and want and I like the way you compare to the innocence of crayons and glue
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haha i love this one. :] it made me think of me and mi novio. <3
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