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Bothersome

Put into fire what you'd put into heart,
Burn the flames and settle for depart -
Never knowing what an outcome will fuel,
Never thinking what a fight will fool.
To exist within love and to expire within hate
Is nothing short of conspiracy within fate.
Why settle for laughter when you can settle for tears?
And why bother to hope when you can be consumed by your fears?
Before each war, you cry defeat;
Before sullen eyes claiming deceit,
Your tired heart pumps with nothing to gain;
And your soul breaks free of this superfluous pain.

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Wrote this a while ago, but never got around to submitting it. I don't like it.

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  • Mr. J
    September 16, 2007
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    i REALLY LIKE IT!!!!

    I really like this one...

    Why settle for laughter when you can settle for tears?
    And why bother to hope when you can be consumed by your fears?
    that is my favorite part it suits me really well right now...its what i am going thru it sucks so much that feeling and stuff....none the less great write i really like it...keep on writing

    Tony


  • with-torn-wings
    September 15, 2007
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    i dont think its so bad.
    kinda like it