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Her good bye

Her goodbye was spiteful
Yet a relief when it came
The silence of our empty home was more than I could bare
But welcome because she wasn’t there

A contest entry

Do you know of this man, he was real

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 16, 2007
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    Wow, I agree very ouchy, good luck!

    • Tercarro
      September 17, 2007
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      I love this one

      Though this is a personal pain for me I actually love the work and feel that this may be the only real and truely good piece of work I have ever written.
      Thanks
      Terry


  • WishMeAway--x
    September 14, 2007
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    ouch ouch ouch.