Lay your head upon my shoulders darling,
And let me cry with you.
I will shed twice as many tears against your one,
Shedding for the one you felt, then the ones I feel for you.
You’re my love, my sweet succulent king,
As the keeper of this Queen,
I seek to cleanse your heart,
Keep your soul intact, worry free.
When the pain soars through you, I feel it too,
Shaking the core of my being,
Immediately I grip hold, pull you close,
And let it flow straight through me.
I will carry it, I can handle it,
Buckling at my knees, I shall press on baby.
Crawl forever if I have to,
Just so you never have to handle it yourself.
Footprints sprawled upon my back, laying there
I will take the line of bullshit, I will handle their cries too.
Just so you can be happy, and not be involved with their lies,
Face squashed to the floor, tears streaking my face, why?
That’s right I love you so much, I will give up my dignity,
Kill my respect, be victim of cruel intentions,
Die silently by your side, as they laugh in my face,
Or shall I say spit in my face, for they too know,
I would take all the shit to keep you from it,
I will walk the fires of destiny’s hell,
Rather then have you walk away from your “friends”,
I swallow my pride, I chew up who I am, and cover my eyes from what's evident.
I will lay down and die, I would carry your burdens,
I would shed you a river to release you,
I would give all that I am, so you can maintain your social life,
This is how much I love you more then I care about me.
More then I care about me.
To My Love, From Deaths Promise
Author notes
Write me a love poem.
Make it slushy-
Write me a broken love poem.
Write me heartbreak
I believe you ca figure out what prompt it was but if not a lovepoem with that of self heartrbreak, one who wil lay broken to keep the other one happy.
Thats love.
I Love You Scott.
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- I'll Be Your Crying Shoulder ♥ Love ♥ by forbidden-colour.
530 points, ended September 22, 2007, 35 entries
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Very sad, but worth the read!
Thank you for quoting the option you choose aswell in your authors notes.
Thank you for entering!
Keep sharing!
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Wow, this is so you, and I know someone above that looks down and sees the heart within, and I believe that He will award you many times over for planting your seeds of compassion sweet soul. Thanks for being you, much love, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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A beautiful loving write sweetheart, I could feel every word and ounce of your love flowing from it. I Love You...Scott
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oh mum this was just beautifully if not sadly penned
it held so much emotion in it that it could be felt the whole way hrough
it was just beautifully done.
well done and hope your ok
love you
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such sweetly flowing words that captures the heart in the essense of love. I hope you find this love or get it before it gets away. very nice flowing with love.
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