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My Night

i'll need many years more
to see the light
of closet darkness
so close to night

in here i see
what i dare
of which I know
i will not share

find me not
please dont try
you see its here
where i do not cry

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  • Chelsea Void
    September 14, 2007

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    I felt this was a little forced, but I think the idea and meaning behind it has the possibility to expand and really represent what you truly want to say in a more powerful fashion.