I saw a leaf fall
deliberate in descent
only for me it seemed.
I smelt a bloom
a whiff of rose
its air, with me, did tarry.
I heard a child’s laughter
magic whimsical sound
it stirred in me a song.
I tasted nature’s honey
gourmet treat of sweetness
just for my palate meant.
I felt warm skin at mid-night
strong arm encircled waist
sweet love solely for me.
Author notes
Thoughts while walking.
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You have captured the the sweet things in life! I really enjoyed this poem.
Poesy
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Sighs~ Such beautiful pictures your words have penned...I feel as though I have walked with you
...I love your work as I love you my dear sister
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Thank heaven for those little muses created just for you, else we might not have had this poem. Another bright and beautiful poem. Lifts the spirit.
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That was lovely This was a very enjoyable peice of work I would like to have those thoughts when i wam walking to. Most the time I can't remember what i was thnking five minutes ago.
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Quiet reflection. Life is full of wonder, and when we allow ourselves to actually embrace a moment, we remember this. Great writing!!!
Martin
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Thank you for your comments and your encouragement. I really do appreciate it.
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Dreamy
I feel this on my mornings walks, drifting along on my walks with dogs,,the senses there for me, and at night
well, that would be a dream ....lovely inspiration that crosses all borders and soul...felt a deep personal touch .Poetic color of life weave.
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Loved this,especially the first stanza ..for you do feel that simple act of nature is done only for your pleasure and the last stanza, well that better be only for you or someone's getting a clobber over the head
bravo!
galfala
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decent=descent
Very sweet poem, full of vivid imagery that appeals to every one of the sense. Really enjoyed reading this. -
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Thank you for the read and the comment and thanks also for catching the descent thing. Sometimes I type faster than I think.
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