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To Rid the sweet touch

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Burn and brew almond oil
Belladonna diced to carry out
The leaves and oil shall blister
non existent scent in snout
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Scopolia of lovers blame
Cut in perfect squares
Saffron deject love in flame
Warmth of partners affairs
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Mix and turn about my charms
As his touch begins to fade
Hazel scent and fairy dust
Witness his skin decay
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  • Oleander
    October 18, 2007

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    It's a wonderful poem! This is a great spell. Thankyou for entering my contest and for being the first.


  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 18, 2007

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    I know someone that would want to try this recipe out on her husband. LOL! Great write. Keep the ink flowing and good luck.
    ~Donna~


  • midnight eyes
    October 17, 2007

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    I liked this a lot, sounds like the perfect recipe. Lol Keep up the great work and good luck.


    Amber


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 27, 2007
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    Love the little pic, fab write. Good luck in the contest.


  • paperparadox silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    oooh aaah...

    Is this brew meant to get rid of errant husbands? If you could bottle it, you'd make a fortune!

    I'm assuming you were the 'brb' person. Thanks for taking the trouble to reserve your spot and writing a suitable entry. I like the animated pic you've used!

    Nice use of rhyme, and you have employed some appropriate use of language to paint your scene. Very atmospheric!

    Best of luck, and thanks again...

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