Platinum droplet
Earthbound in a living pool
Screams to be let free
A contest entry
- Wow Me! by Malkolis.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku by piccola.
450 points, ended August 9, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I will not be one who says, "lovely haiku, I enjoyed it" because although the words in themselves are beautiful they hold no meaning for me as I do not understand. Unless it is a raindrop falling to earth and the final splash is the freedom ... I asked for a set up and an aha! Sorry that I don't see that here. Thank you for entering.
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I must admit that haiku usualy does not fare well with me. But this one intrigues me, if only I could figure out your meaning behind it, you have me spellbound in trying to figure it out. good job, that is not easy with me.
Good luck in the contest
Malk -
I loved this. It is so deep, with many different interpretations. What was the one you had in mind? Nicely writen!
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Lovly wright. Liked alot
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