You were my heart
My love.
You seemed a gift
From the gracious above
But now when I see your face
My heart goes to a different place
Where sorrows breed pain
And heartbreak screams its name.
The ease of your smile
Rips across my world.
Like an unsharpened sword
It spreads pain and discord.
Memories tear away at my soul.
Leaving me not, but hanging by a thread.
Set my heart at ease,
As i cry my final tear.
Now,
As heartbreak comes ever near.
If you please, give me peace.
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST: I WANT LOVE RIGHT NOW. PREWRITES ALLOWED...COME IN AND CHECK OUT by the-gifted.
600 points, ended September 26, 2007, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITE CONTEST>>>>BREAK_UPS by PersuingHappyness.
400 points, ended November 2, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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hey i like this one to lol
i think i like all of them lol you are so good better then me lol
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aww that is great. thanks for sharing it with me. thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
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Aye. I've been there too. Well written.
It's damn good, but I know what it took to write. Good luck.
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Been there done that got the T-shirt!
~Stormy~
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