Life Like the Seasons
In Spring were born
in summer we grow
In autumn we fall
In winter we die
A contest entry
- Amaze me by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended September 15, 2007, 18 entries
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This Is Truth
I love the title The Stages Of Our Lives Are Like The Seasons then the first line Life like the Seasons then the last In winter we die. You have all the season's and life is this way Spring born and summer groe autum fall and winter die. All those different seasons of life. It hit me hard emotionally for I am grieving the loss of my son. It's not winter yet, but he is gone Sept 16 this week. 24 years old. I guess the reality is we will all die and I look forwar to spring to be born again and come alive in summer as I shall grow. Thank you excellent write so much meaning with so few words. Thanks for sharing with me. stavykm
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alot said, well expressed.
great job on penning the cyclr of life verses the seasons seems to be the way for us these past years,thanks for sharing
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So simple yet so much truth seeps from these words. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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Thanks A Lot =]
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Honest
Short and simple. The way I adore poetry.
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Thank You =] x
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Very good way of portraying it. The writing hurts my eyes tho....good luck!
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