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All the broken stars that we see falling
tell us a story
and we relay what we saw in perfect words
to eachother on a bed in a room that is dimmed
;we hold eachother loosly
picturing words from what we see

to say something impressive to the other

Please tell me what you think

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  • Klayer
    September 14, 2007
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    Lovly wright. Liked alot

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