I used to think...
Love was only found in dreams
When you would walk along the Beach and hear
Them angels voices sing
Them I met an angel in true human form
he saved my life
and tought me how to learn
He took my hand when i was down
and pulled me to my feet
now i cant imagin if he was to go
how my heart would break
and all the things i yet do not no
his kiss is as soft as babys skin
he holds me close and Banishes the pain within
now i no that love is not only found in dreams
and i shall never hear an angel scream
for i found true love int he wakeinglife
and forever and always hes my Garden light
Author notes
xHeartofDarknessx
A contest entry
- Anything!! by JOSHv3.
450 points, ended September 16, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "What You Love" by FallenAngel09.
300 points, ended October 4, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for your entry into my contest, your talent and hard work are very much appreciated. I liked this poem, a show of redemption that I have yet to read. Well written and well thought out, though I do have a few suggestions. You keep writing "no" when I'm sure you mean "know", just a minor spelling error. Also, "Garden Light" probably should have been "Guiding Light" though I"m not too sure about that one. Overall, a good poem and I hope you do well in the contest
Your Host,
Tiphanie
p.s sorry it has taken so long to get back to you, but it has been truly hectic and all I have had time todo is study and go to class. Sorry for the inconvenience. Any way, hope you are well. -
awwww this is a beautiful loving poem =]
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Very lovly poem. Thanks for sharing
Df, 14
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