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Trippin'

Rainbow drops
on windshield
splash.

Trees bend
down and start
to laugh.

Stars streak
words across
the sky.

Profound
revelations
from up high.

Answers we
try to seek,
when acid's
ride starts
to peak.

A contest entry

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  • Jfd
    September 14, 2007
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    Simple and short yet very effective. Thanks for entering!


  • Klayer
    September 14, 2007
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    Very lovly poem. Thanks for sharing

    Df, 14


  • crimsondew
    September 14, 2007

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    Well done on the prompt...At first I thought It went somewhere else, but your conclusion brought me home...
    ALl the best in the contest!