Man discharges toxic gases,
Plant absorbs it to make air fresh,
Forest is more humane than human.
Factories pollute water causing diseases,
Rain comes, man can drink safe water,
Cloud is more humane than human.
People eat all sorts of things,
Good bacteria secrets enzyme to digest them,
Even micro-organism is more humane than human.
When we, man will become really humane?
A contest entry
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Again I just can't see why people choose to do such things to themselves and others, I don't see why anyone can find it ever worth it, as both sides seem to just stay the same on their beliefs and even if you kill everyone against you, there will be those who pretend to not disagree and the others would die believing what they did, so what did you gain? Nothing.
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Nicely done. Oh the irony eh?
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Definitely a change in style and thoughts. The repetitiveness got a little irritable near the end but definately a creative mind to pen a brilliant piece.
Much luck.
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