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Multicolored Dreams

          Would you like to travel

                       Through your multicolored dreams

                                     Sit around for hour's drinking multicolored tea

                                                 There's no sign, of rich friends only multicolored trees

                                                              Swaying with the music, and the multicolored bees

     You could catch the blues train

                  Through the multicolored skies

                               Spinning through the heavens

                                            On a multicolored high

Fast trains take you quicker

             Slow trains never stop

                          See all the glowing flowers

                                    In the multicolored shop

 

     You could watch the fish glow in a multicolored stream 

 

                  Sit around for hours watching all the world turn green

 

                               You could touch the distance through a multicolored eye

           

                                                 you could touch it all when the mind wakes up the skies.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Credit Photo: http://gi262.photobucket.com/groups/ii84/4P6X685J0/ws_Inspiration_1680x1050.jpg

ii. Acid. Ecstasy. Mushrooms. Opium.

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  • Wow I really like this. Have you ever done shrooms? It reminds me of when i did them a week ago. You know those 3D movies? and when you look at the screen without the glasses and everythiung on the screen is blue and red? thats what everything looked like. nice write XD


  • writeroftoast
    November 25, 2008

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    Great poem, very trippy, very original. I loved the form you put it in, as well, a great idea. Good look in the contest.


  • aboomer silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    Love all your multi-colored images! Even though it sounds like a beautiful world, I think I'd probably soon go color-blind...lol
    Very enjoyable.

    Thank you for a lovely (multi-colored) entry.
    best wishes in the contest


  • WindUpEnigma gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    Beautiful, amazing, breathtaking.
    "Sit around for hours drinking multicolored tea"--hahaaaa, love it!
    "Fast trains take you quicker,
    slow trains never stop"--wonderful!
    Nothing but praise for this piece from me. Thanks for entering


  • risewiththesmoke
    December 2, 2007
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    thanks for entering


  • Jfd
    September 14, 2007
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    Although I'm not a big fan of rhyme, in this case it worked for me, it was nicely executed and not forced....as for the repetition of "multicolored" I'm not sure if i love it or hate it haha I think I'll have to re-read this one....thanks for entering!


    • Timespell
      September 14, 2007
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      Multicolored

      Thanks, I am sure it will grow on you, LOL. Any way's the subject in question for your contest,would really have this in mind. Now is it Multicolored or Multicoloured?

      Thanks


  • Billythekid
    September 14, 2007
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    This is very unique. I like it alot.


    • Timespell
      September 14, 2007
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      Thanks Billy, Very glad you liked my Multicolored poem

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