Made some changes
while you were gone;
threw out your clothes
changed the locks -
figured it's time
you moved on.
Author notes
prompt: edited
A contest entry
- pif - Enter your best quickie pre-write by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended September 20, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LMAO
I love this, very, very good.
Thanks so much for this entry
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wow... short.. to the point... haahaaa EDITED! nice job with your prompt It def. shines through this!
J~~~
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Another short but to the point poem. I LOVED IT! I hope it is not you that has to go through this pain ....
Thanks for the read
Hugz
Himler
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Succinct and nicely voiced.
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This is so sad and I know this had to hurt. I know the story and I understand and keep you in my prayers.
Love,
Amera♥
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oopsers. somebody done screwed up. Livin in de car again...
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Loved this...Wonderful pick up on the prompt!
All the best!
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I smiled, this is a moment of personal power. It's a sweet rhyme, about the right size to post on the door while you take a vacation.
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grannyeir, while I like the poem the message says it all. Not sure how the person on the other side will feel, but I am sure it will not be appreciated! Excellent write. Hope you are fine? FransB
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Yeah some changes were made huh? Sounds like you cleaned house too me. lol very good poem, enjoyed it alot.
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HAHA! Great work here my friend.
Some changes were meant to be made.
Good luck to you with this one!
Jeremy0826
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haha - good! (That you threw him out, that is.) Nice to see a slice of life haiku for a change.
Mark
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