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My Grandma's hands.

 

Grandma's hands were

chubby and wrinkled,

like blown up rubber gloves

with fingers like sausages.

 

 

 

Her wedding band concealed

for years in the

deep crevices of time.

 

 

 

Yet, a closer look reveals

hardship in those furrows,

days when she toiled

to make ends meet

and when she did

someone or something

moved them again.

 

 

 

Sewing, knitting, baking

bread and stew, scrubbing

flagstone floors for

the love of her family.

Those strong loving hands

nursed three generations,

made a politician, a doctor

two nurses and an actor.

 

 

 

 

From her reclining chair

she watches with pride

and still holds those hands

out to greet us.

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  • Jesann gold member
    September 21, 2008
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    This is lovely! I really like your last verse...an image that will always be yours to treasure.


  • LeilaJayne
    September 14, 2008

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    Wow i can relate to alot of this. Especially the mention of stew and sewing and knitting, all things my nan did before she got ill. This is brilliant x


  • FindingFaith
    October 5, 2007

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    This was superb in it's simplicity. You have captured a mountain of memories, a lifetime in such few lines. Very well written. Thank you for this entry...Best wishes and God Bless...


  • Akimbo
    September 17, 2007
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    and a poet!

    You've done well. She will proud once more.
    Kj


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 14, 2007
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    Dolores

    beautifully written. In grandma's hands are contained the entire love of the world.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    Ah Grandmas there love is amazing. I rememeber my grandma she was just amazing this is a very nice poem.Thank you for sharing .Best Wishes

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