Your sorrows, I have tasted,
bitter upon my soul's tastebuds.
No words can ever erase
the welts within your memory.
I'd offer the only medicine I know;
my love,
to soothe away the stings of life.
And I will catch your falling tears,
pooled in puddles,
forming the oceans of my heart.
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Prompt: Oceans of the heart
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- PIF/PROMPT 10/10 by penman.
525 points, ended September 14, 2007, 8 entries
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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well done my dear friend especially these lines
I'd offer the only medicine I know;
my love,
to soothe away the stings of life.
And I will catch your falling tears,
pooled in puddles,
forming the oceans of my heart.
Best wishes always xxxx
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