Pull me down, throw me to my knees,
You know I like it rough.
Make it worth my while,
Make me crave each and every touch.
Tease me with that toungue,
Make it last so long.
Hear me as i moan,
I'm the bitch you wanna own.
Just a crazy, skitzo whore,
I'm nothing yet you keep wanting more.
So toss me to the ground,
Yell and curse I love the sound.
Orgasmic pain,
My only latch to fame.
Make me say your name,
Watch as I twist, Listen as I scream.
Harder, faster, MORE,
Please me to the core.
Deeper, higher, almost there,
Fuck me till my insides tear.
Author notes
i dunno.. I wrote it before me and my bf were together... when I was going through a confusing time..... it is about him but there's a lot incorporated in it also
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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* Is Bathed in Cold Sweat *
Dayum! Tasha that ending was just perfect! this poek was really an all round excellent set up from the beginning. ya got my heart beating and wow I am just impressed with the sheer volume of this poem. excellent job all round your wording was superb your vivid images painted through out the poem really got to me and its just a great poem. excellent work and keep it up. Signed, Paul -
...awesome...yup- awesome.
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yum........
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I dunno either
I expected something entirelly different but I enjoyed this one. It's almost hateful... you to yourself... however it's this hate that brings you on to read the next stanza. 
Another thing, I'm so glad you didn't have every second word as "fuck" and kept the whole piece away from cheesey
Bandaid.
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