Decrepit smiles and
strangled cries.
Eyes of void
telling putrid lies.
This mirror's shattered,
Blinds tore 'side.
My mask is broken,
Rules abide.
These feeble attempts,
are ghastly crude.
They'll never win,
I shall not lose.
This endless cluster,
forever born.
Casts it's shadow,
upon the scorn.
These damned vines,
thorns aside.
Creates the web,
of Widows bribe.
This dimming black,
sides born red.
Show all the things
...
inside my head.
Author notes
BROKEN
A contest entry
- feelings by crystallynnbradford.
390 points, ended September 15, 2007, 16 entries
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Opinion greatly appreciated.
Comments
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Ok this is a great piece...but not really what I am looking for. I am looking for true darkness, murder, mayhem, chaos etc. Feel free to submit another piece
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Okie dokie! I might decide to enter another one, but... I haven't decided as of yet.
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yay!!!! you put it in your box!!! thank god because I really liked this piece
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Haha! No problem, I was really glad that I found it.
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Very good
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Thank you so much!
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this is a very intresting piece but once again I am force to DQ a great piece of work because the poet has not done has instructions say
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