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Where all the tears are

Trapped inside a four wall doom
someone elses bedroom
pain welling up so deep within, scary thoughts settle in
tears stay back but leaking somewhere
mind dwells in a land thats nowhere
alone inside a dark abyss i'll cry later in sweet abliss"

Author notes

I missed my friends i wrote this awhile ago.This was my "first" persey first poem

Thank you for spending time reading, Greatly appreciated ^^

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  • autumns rising
    September 13, 2007

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    It was so definetely worth my time. This is a great poem. Very short but good. I always have this weird obsession with having short poems. It scares me, I dunno im weird like that lol
    Good job


    • Animay
      September 13, 2007
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      Ahh danka

      eep thanks!
      this exploded from my head when i wrote it lol