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life

my life is short,
i try to not think about it,
when i die,
please burn my body,
put me some where safe,
play the tune i always loved,
keep me locked in your heart,
never let any thing happen to me,
my time is going bye so quickly,
and soon i want to be free,
let me play fairys,
let me do some magick,
let me go away from this world in peace,
please just let die,
i can't live without him,
these feeling i feel is funny,
i see thingsd before they happen,
so let me RIP,
can you let go of me,
but keep my soul,
i love you....

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  • teddybare gold member
    February 24

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    i could hear the voices singing

    on the grassy hill

    good write

    too many things taken ....
    life ..the ultimate schoolhouse


    well done

    ~teddybare~


  • bunchnbunch
    February 20
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    bunchnbunch

    very good write.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    all of our lives are short,,even if you live to 100..lovely poem dont think we should let you yet smile peter


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 2, 2007

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    very smooth and good flow, life is short...excellent poem, thank you for sharing

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