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Tell Me (NOT FINISHED!!!!!)

...Everything...
  That you love me
      That you care
        That you'll always forgive me
            That I'm yours
              Tell me I'm beautiful
                  And that everything will be alright
                    Tell me you'll hug me, and hold me tight
                  Tell me that my kisses mean the world
              Just make me yours...
            Tell me that things on your mind
        Your feelings, good or bad.
     

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  • RainDownOnMe
    October 30, 2008
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    it sounds good

    it sounds good so far. finish it. great job btw