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I can not believe the horror
Of what I'm witnessing right now
The abandond lives forsaken
Rotting children, rotting how?

They are locked away in darkness
Left to rock, as limbs lay wasted
Ignored as if they're worthless
How the hell is this tolerated?

Reduced to skin and bones now
No words, no love, no hope,
So many dreams imprisoned
I still can't grasp the scope

Of all these bodies ruined
All this dignity stripped away
My heart is torn asunder
At what I've seen today

I've lost all faith in people
In good outweighing bad
One heart can make a difference?
All I feel now is sad.

They never feel the sunlight
75 faces, 150 hands
They live their lives in silence
Answer only raw demands

Aggression punishes weakness
Humanity a burden not a gift
All that soul potential
Left to fester, left to drift.

I'm sorry.









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  • JinSays gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    They never feel the sunlight
    75 faces, 150 hands
    They live their lives in silence
    Answer only raw demands

    and

    Aggression punishes weakness
    Humanity a burden not a gift
    All that soul potential
    Left to fester, left to drift.

    I'm sorry.

    Wow, Miss Daisy, just wow....
    I have no other words for this, you really rreached in and tore my heart out with this..
    Im just ready to cry..

    Im gonna send you something to maye cheer you up from this...I think you'll like it
    Jin


    • daisybee
      September 15, 2007
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      thanks

      it was just something I had to get off my chest..and this is how it came out. x


  • Midnight-Engaged
    September 15, 2007

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    OMG is this a true story?!

    Wow, if it is then but if not, then you are both amazing and twisted for thinking it up!


    • daisybee
      September 15, 2007
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      watched a documentary called bulgarias abandonded children which made me write this..xx

  • Climbing2nothing
    September 14, 2007

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    75 faces, 150 hands
    They live their lives in silence
    Answer only raw demands

    (I Guess another refugee smuggling bungle?..)BEAUTIFUL heart felt words here, the intensity carried to the reader really makes one want to scream, to tear, to stare at the sea, to call the spirit, and maybe meet them at their best upon the bridge of the other side...

    anyheys you have touched my heart
    so thanks w manderines and pairs
    -JAS


    • daisybee
      September 14, 2007
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      thanks for the words

      I watched a documentary about Bulgarias care institutes last night. I have never witnessed such scant regard for human life-heard of it-never seen it.

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