Each time I pick up a pencil
my fingers start scribing your name,
stopping it before it starts in school
is becoming my favorite game...
When someone asks me how I've been
I fight my tongue for control,
without restraint I'd tell the whole story
of my new life and Love's new role.
I have tried to pick my senior picture
and I keep going back to one...
but I can't use it because it's too old-
of me and you at prom.
I try to call my mother
just to say what's up and hi-
but my thumb keeps slipping up
and dialing you on speed dial five...
When the night air gets too cold
my jackets don't stop the shaking-
I need to be wrapped in your sweater
that was left prey to my taking...
Before bed I see my pillow
but it's you that walks my dreams;
it's you that's always with me...
sewing us together (into Love's red seams).
Please tell me what you think
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good piece and one that I can relate to. I have a piece that you'd probably appreciate because it has a very similar theme as this piece, it is called "Art in the Passing Moments". It's scary how much these two intertwine with one another. Great job with this piece!
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awesome poem! probably one of my favorites thus far! creative and charming and funny, but in a cute way... yay!
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awwww! so cute! adorable...I can just picture that pen scribblinb the name 'Vint' all over the page....you guys are soo cute! and its such a turn from all those depressing and dismal poems you used to write...."Thanks Vint, you've really opened her range!" he he e! muah! i love you hun!
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me-yaaaaw.... That is so cute! I'm glad you found some one who can occupy your mind! in a good way!
My favorite rhyme was the speed dial five one.. for some reason it tickled me and I giggled.. This is over all a very entertaining poem and once again I'm happy for you!!! :: giggles::
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Thank you- I'm glad I found him too...I've never been this happy
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