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Music Talks

Music Talks to the soul
That's why we love it
Nothing can compare
To that beat in your ear
To the sound of the drums
And the strum of the guitar
To the wild Roar of the bass
Or the conjuring spirit of voice
And let's not forget
The graceful singing of the Piano
yes,music is one thing
That one thing everyone can agree
Is important to us all
In our speeding cars
Or in the bedroom
Trying NOT to sleep
Wherever you are
No matter who you are
As soon as you hear a familiar chord
You're caught,trapped
By the fiery Notes
There's no way out
But you don't mind
Trapped you are within your will
To be doomed loving this Submissive state
Your mind Mesmerized by the sound
Loving it more and more
You'll always love your music box trap
You couldn't see life without it
And neither could I
Unable to escape
I'm more than happy to admit
That musical enchantment
is the finest trap
anyone could ever set

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Beverly Holoka

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  • She burns
    September 14, 2007

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    Oh so veru beautiful and very true, this is a masterpiece for me, how you explain msuic, it's life itself, more than everything, a part of who we are, forever there helping us, forever there inside of us...


  • crimsondew
    September 13, 2007
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    Wonderful imagery, I used love music like this too. However I have changed it for some reason, but I know that feel.

    • Beverlynohime
      September 13, 2007
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      Everyone's gotta love music...I bet you still do...just maybe not as much.


      • crimsondew
        September 13, 2007
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        I guess so, I still love a few songs, not many like before, I hope you get what I mean.


        • Beverlynohime
          September 13, 2007
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          yeah I guess...but I just can't picture myself..or anyone for that matter...just liking a few songs...o.o....


          • crimsondew
            September 13, 2007
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            At one stage I couldn't either, but as you grow older, you find other means of calming yourself, I found out that prayer was a good escape among others. And in my religion all kinds of music is not acceptable. So I made a conscious effort to steer clear from it. I still have my favorites, as it is hard to miss it in this era. Music is everywhere.


            • Beverlynohime
              September 13, 2007
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              ah Ic. I'm not religious at all...haha. And I just couldn't see myself living with out music so if I was in a religion like that I couldn't live..hmm...I admire you for it tho..O.O Because I so couldn't do it!


              • crimsondew
                September 13, 2007

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                Thanks for that comment.I would like to say one more thing though, Life has its ways to teach you stuff, it gets to you if it wants to and noone can stop it. Destiny can be moulded only through prayer and faith.
                I do not want to preach here, but I can not hold this little advice back from a lovely person like you!

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