Lamby's Dance.

Mary had a little lamb,
She also had a pig,
Whenever she put a cd on,
They'd dance a little jig,
One day she left it playing,
She simply just forgot,
When she noticed what she'd done,
They were tied up in a knot!
Both ended up in casualty,
With a sorry tale to tell,

The doctors fixed them up just fine,

Then bade them all farewell,

Now Mary learnt her lesson,

Which really wasn't sweet,

When you've got dancing animals,

Don't leave the music on repeat!

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A contest entry

Mary had a little.... by Melodies. 550 points, ended September 14, 2007, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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The eensy weensy spider died and went to hell... Wait, What? by Oracle of Darkness. 450 points, ended November 1, 2007, 14 entries
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Make me laugh by Mystal LaRose. 770 points, ended February 5, 22 entries
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POETRY MONTH! by whoopie.x. 300 points, ended April 21, 73 entries
Silver trophy winner
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whoopie.x
April 19
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nice and funny
Mystal LaRose
February 3

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this is funny and really good i like the ryhm and the beat to it thanks for entering my contest and making me laugh
LadyDementia
October 24, 2007

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So Sweet
This is really cute A very enjoyable read indeed. All the best in the contest!
LadyDementia
October 24, 2007
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So Sweet
This is really cute A very enjoyable read indeed. All the best in the contest!
sweetdancer
October 11, 2007

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cute!this is very nice poetry!i love how you put the words into a respectful piece of poetry!to tell you the truth i think this is one of the best poems here on allpoetry!well i have to go!always do your best and never give up!

sincerely,
sweetdancer (yasmine)
captain howdy
September 17, 2007
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lol...hahah...so cute! Gratz on your bronze, dearie!
Starz of Heaven
September 14, 2007

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Hehe I love this very cute indeed im smiling wide.Thanks for sahring and goodluck to you in the contest.Best Wishes
Princess Perdue
September 14, 2007
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Just got to tell ya I'm still laughing in fact I've got tears rolling down lol
Princess Perdue
September 14, 2007

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lolololol......soooo funny! I can just picture this scene, had me splitting my sides. Well done indeed. Good luck in the contest.

Shaz xx
crimsondew
September 13, 2007
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Hilarious...You made me laugh here...
Good flow and good rhyme... =))
Melodies
September 13, 2007

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OH MY GOSH!!! So adorable!
SO funny and darling and cute and just plain FINE! You are such a clever one, dear poet!
islekine
September 13, 2007
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TOO cute!
I love it!
Good luck in the contest!
*PEACE*