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Animals and Alliteration

The sparrow soars so sweetly
The dog does daring deeds
The cute cat cares completely
The squirrel snacks on seeds

Animals are active
Forever will they be
Though some are not attractive
They fill me up with glee 

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  • heygoo
    September 13, 2007
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    This is a darling piece of poetry, and you have captured the essence of each animal adequately.