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Ping

good gracious

green grass grows
generously


go grow
green grass

please present
plants
purposely

ping!

Author notes

"consciously consult your cranium."

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  • heygoo
    September 13, 2007
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    I like the simplicity here. It just seems so full of innocence. The ping is pretty pleasing.


  • passim silver member
    September 13, 2007

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    Why does ping! make me smile so much? I don't even know if that is your intention. I love this little poem anyway. It's great


  • bananasfoster42
    September 13, 2007
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    awesome