Mary had a little crush
but she would never say.
Each time she would approach him,
she'd blush and run away.
Mary had a little fear
that another girl might come.
She knew she needed courage,
so she tried to gather some.
Mary had a little shock
when she gave love a try.
For when she walked up to her crush
he kissed another guy.
A contest entry
- Mary had a little.... by Melodies.
550 points, ended September 14, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me laugh by lilblueeyesmine1978.
425 points, ended September 20, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want your funniest! by Angel Of Heaven99.
725 points, ended September 27, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love it!
This is funny and the ending was very unpredicted
Great job and thanks for entering!
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Great
Hah hah-haw, yee-hee: Now that was great! I didn't see that ending coming till it hit me square between the eyes. With the laugh, and the flow; I personally think this was the best poem that was in the contest. Kudos to you!
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ooooowwwww
loved this. wonderfully written. thansk for entering my contest and i hope to read more from you soon. i am adding this to the finalists list good luck.
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Darn!
I hate it when that happens!
Cute little poem. It has good rhythm and rhyme.
Good luck in this contest.
qt
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I am so sorry for darling Mary!
'Tis a cruel and strange world out there and poor Mary will have to try and try again!
Darling write, dear one... made me smile! >>>>>> 
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