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Dirty Girl

Call me your nasty girl,
Make me your little slut.
You are my salvation,
I your disease of which you can't get enough.

Hate me, break me,
Cuff me fuck me.
I like it rough, make it hurt,
smile as I scratch my knees down in the dirt.

I'm your dirty slave,
Only here to please you.
You'll never hear me complain,
For I like to hurt you too.

Grab me, hold me, scratch me,
Make my filthy flesh bleed.
Fuck me, bite me, get me high,
Throw me, make me beg and plead.

Pain for pleasure,
Torture for joy.
I know you want to take it,
So don't act so coy.

Hurt me, kiss me,
Hold me, save me.
Fuck me till we see the sun,
Make love to me your only one.

Author notes

about rough sex.... rougher then me and my boyfriend are... but it's exaggerated for effect

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    September 17, 2007

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    Awesome

    Wow! I just got through reading Chrissy's newest and semi old writes about rough sex and here we go again your writing that way also. what really made me draw my breathe in was the difference in style you both have and you still managed to draw us in with such a great vivid imagination. Tasha this is just one of those types of poems that really leave you speechles.s excellent write all round and just keep up the good work. On to your next one I go. Signed, Paul


  • DarkoKatie
    September 15, 2007
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    kaithleen

    well............
    i think you need a little more in your life and i dont think being a dirty whore is something to be proud of.
    i think you need to get a hobbie or something else to write about!!
    other then that i think you are a great writer and can really go somewhere with your writing.


    • Bruised.Roses
      February 6, 2008
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      umm i'm not a dirty whore...it's a poem about my bf and i before we were together because we were both in the middle of a real confussing time but thanks for the comment anyways
      XTashX


  • my savior-pedro
    September 13, 2007

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    all ki kat gots ta say is....
    YUM YUM YUM!!!!!!!
    lol

    ask caseybear what that means..
    hahah.


  • xxTheRadFreakxx
    September 13, 2007
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    this is a very very good write.


  • PuRfekly-Phlaw3d
    September 13, 2007
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    WHOA!

    damn! i love this one!

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