Those gorgeous blue eyes, cries of loneliness
A heart so fragile as if made of crystal
Ready to break with the tenderness of touches
Such sorrow yet yearning to be loved
Such instability in your life
Abandonment by your parents
Becoming a victim of your own raw emotions
Breathing in the anxiety of endless nights
Scared of the person you have become
Close those eyes of yours
Search deep within your soul
Confront the demons that invade your heart
Diminish that rage that destroys everything in your path
Remove that mask that everyone sees
Let me extinguish your despair, Let me love you
For there is only one thing you need to wear
Those beautiful blue eyes
Author notes
I saw a picture of a beautiful person, with striking blue eyes, but with a look so sad. I was inspired to write this.
What did you think
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Such a beautiful but sad write. Simply amazing piece you aspired from a picture...
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A majestic piece, with a beautiful agony that permeates throughout. I miss your words, and you. Please send a little message my way, dear. I love this. As always, elegantly conveyed with a talent that is wholly your own. Keep writing. I'll keep reading. Much love.
Your dear friend,
~Stephy.
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Love it!
What an awesome write! I had daggers in my heart when i read this, it totally got inside me, I dont really know what to say! But i'm so glad I came back to AP after a couple of years, you've made it all worthwhile! Always one of my fav writers, I really connect with your work, thanks
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I have seen those eyes in many brilliant hues. You have captured their essence. Very uplifting words of hope for someone you've never encountered. Then again, I would suspect she is someone we all know. Beautiful work!
I miss you dear heart and pray you are well.
Always Loving YOU ♥
Renee
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What a stunning poem and how like you to want to help someone...
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This is a really beautiful poem Rosa. I wish that I could find someone who would want to love me this way. You know, someone who wants to help my heart and spirit. Someone who sees me for me and not the person I show the world.
It's an amazing thing for someone to want to love you even though you arent perfect. You have done a fantastic job here and I am glad to see you writing again.
Take care,
Criss
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