Pull my hair and pull me down,
Wrap your hands around my neck.
Slap me hard and leave a mark,
I am your toy do as you please.
Fuck me hard and make me feel real,
Thrust yourself deeper inside of me.
I am but your nasty whore here for you,
Beat me, hate me and fuck me really hard.
Throw me to my knees and hold me there,
Look into my eyes and soul as you moan.
Use me any way that you see fit,
I deserve nothing more than a pile of dirt.
A ragging freak who loves pain for pleasure,
There can be no joy without beautiful pain.
Slap me, throw me, beat me and watch me smile,
There is nothing you can do that will hurt me.
Author notes
Another poem that i wrote in class..my poetrys weird i know...
Please tell me what you think
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Great Writing
You are very good. I've enjoyed reading your samples.
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I fucking love this ... It's hard-core ... amazing ... hot ... and wow ... is my mouth watering ... Very very well done ... I am in awe ... lol ... I love to read some of this stuff ... it makes me want my husband more and more ... and besides ... he don't mind it too much himself lmao =))
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this was fantastic i love the xxxxx in your lyrics i think you write very well sex appeal in this i dont know a single soul on a p who hasnt written one sex poem so just keep writing
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Wow!
Now this one really hit me hard. I know it is just a poem but it really hit me hard. I had the imag eof my very first love being brutally raped before my eyes as I was stunned before kickin his ass and wlel the images that flew through my mind after reading this just left me gaspin for air. This is a very depe intense poem and yet a very well penned one too. I would not be suprised if their are people who perform in this way. needless to say you leave me in awe at your incredible poetry. keep up the good work.
Signed, Paul
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this is a freaken awesume i love..
A ragging freak who loves pain for pleasure,
There can be no joy without beautiful pain.
Slap me, throw me, beat me and watch me smile,
There is nothing you can do that will hurt me.
xoxo the rad freak xoxo
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