Hate me, beat me and fuck me,
That's all i'm good for.
A quick fuck you will forget,
Another five cent whore for your collection.
I throw my body away like garbage,
No respect whatsoever for this temple.
I'm here for your entertainement only,
So use me anyways you see fit.
Grip your hands around my neck,
Throw me to the ground once again,
Confirm my suspicions that I'm nothing,
So hate me, beat me and fuck me.
That's all I deserve anyways,
Treat me like the skank I trully am.
Use me, steal my dignity and leave,
Lying on the ground waiting for the next in line.
Author notes
A poem that i wrote in class today. I dunno its fucked up but its how i feel..hope someone comments.
Please tell me what you think
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I can so relate
this is exactly how I feel sometimes. You put it into words.
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Intriguing
what really gets me about this poem of yours is how depe and image imprinted this poem is. I could easily envivison this poem in motion and being done to some girl who wants that. Now looking at it from another point of view it is sad that this is how your feelings are like. to me it seems like your rage and anger are combined with your soft side/exotic side. either way this is a gem of a poem and its quite complexing but well written. keep up the very good work.
Signed Paul 
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wow this is really intence!!! And you are not a whore hun! you have been through a lot and I know this! You are more than what you think you are1 keep on writing hun and take care!
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i like it
the poem you wrote is straight from the heart..the words may not be pretty but you certainly got across how you felt..please explore these feelings because i know it is important..i suffer from issues and i write poems so close to you that you would not believe it..but it was a cry..maybe no-one heard it for awhile..but i heard me and it helped to release all that "stuff"...i am new to this site and don't have anything up yet..butif you would like to read anything i will post it up..these aren't easy poems to write, let alone have others read..
anyway..keep up the writing..mjb
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can i beat the phuck out of you???please
damn cool poem it makes me want to smash in my ex g/f's skull with a huge wooden spoon haha jk wow pretty phucked up poem but it rocks are you into S & M or nah???anyways keep writing
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this is a excallent poem, very good and nice to read! =]
xoxo the rad freak
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