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Life Abstracted

No one knows me.

I wade alone in a sea of flesh
They look right through me
Invisible to the eye
Transparent to the brain

Afloat in the pool of life
No one to refrain me from drowning
Drifting from reality
Grappling for a peace of mind

I subsist, but to no avail
I think, but to no end
I listen, to understand
I say, but am not heard

No one knows me
Who am I, to them?

Do you remember me?

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 14, 2007
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    Oh what an off-the-edge writing about the cornstalks and life...nciely done. I do. I do remember laughing silks in summer's sweet breeze.

  • angryelf6886
    September 13, 2007
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    cool write...definatly memorable