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The Voice Within

To be an individual,
Is to be free.
How did I get here?
How have I grown to be?

Did my parents mold me,
To be who I am today?
Did my friends complete the gaps?
Did I have a say?

Is my fate written in the stars?
Is my path pre-set?
Do I travel towards my destiny,
With any regrets?

Many questions plague my mind,
When I have a moment.
Should I live out my life or
Should I just postpone it?

I hate to think my book’s been written,
By everyone but me.
I linger over a vacant page,
Eagerly waiting to see.

Too many paths to follow,
But all leading to a choice.
Some say life is preordained,
But I say I have a voice.

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    September 25, 2007

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    Welcome to allpoetry

    Life is not preordained. God may know the outcome but we make the choices that come to that outcome. Nice flow and structure. Good rhythm.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy
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