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I am Your Spiderman

Peter Parker was beaten by a Spider
and became a Spiderman.
I became your Spiderman by being fascinated  by you.
As Peter Parker protected Mary Jane Watson
I will protect you.
If you go to any dark alley
and eveteasers follow you.
I will come and save you.
From you I do not need any gratitude.
I will express my love by defending you. 

Author notes

The scene in the dark alley was influenced by Spiderman 1(movie).

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    this is good and
    you showed the scenes
    feelings truly

    Riftkin

  • Leaving Today
    September 13, 2007
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    sounds very sincere. creative thought, spiderman in poem...good one