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There Won't Be A Next Time!

I've asked you to go,

Although I'm a bit confused;

By your sweet words,

I'm still bruised...

This is no, just you go!

A contest entry

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  • tender-butterfly
    September 26, 2007

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    Firstly thank you for the entry.
    Indeed this is simple has holds on to meaning...
    Well done and all the best to you...

  • nidaluver
    September 13, 2007

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    Simple Splendor

    I love the simplicity. Though short, it gets the point across extremely well. Very constructive with words you are. I found a special torment for "I'm still bruised..." that line is so committed that it's fitting. Wonderful job.